The Story Path/Act 0 of IV

The Whole Picture

Race morningA half-second at mile 18, then eighteen weeks back.6 scenes · ~15 min

Open at the mat, mid-race, then rewind eighteen weeks. The whole system at low resolution, so the shape is familiar before any part is explained.

The scenes

  1. Four grams, no batteryMile 18 of the Harborview Marathon, mid-stride.3 min
  2. The form on the kitchen tableEighteen weeks earlier. A phone, a laptop, and a form filled in before the window opens.3 min
  3. What the tap actually madeTen o'clock on registration morning, and eighty thousand people have the same idea.3 min
  4. Case watches a spinnerThe only part of the machine Case will ever see.2 min
  5. The app said pending, the email said yesTwo minutes in which Traversal disagreed with itself.2 min
  6. One entry per personA rule nobody can see, doing most of the work.2 min

What lights on your story map here

0/19concepts lit

one cell per scene · width is its conceptsreading a scene lights its cell

19 fluency — say them in a meeting

Show all 19, scene by scene
hardwaresoftwareinput → processing → outputapplicationwebsiteweb appmobile appdesktop appcodedatainfrastructureabstractionsystemcomponentstatesource of truthuser interfaceuser experiencebusiness logic

Act 0 — the boundary

The half-second at the matWhat you can see

480 msMolly's phone shows the split.

  1. 0 msThe chip wakes inside the mat's field.
  2. 2 msIt sends one number: 11208.
  3. 480 msMolly's phone shows the split.

3 steps so far. The rest of the half-second arrives in later acts.

At the mat, which part of that half-second is the chip responsible for?